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  1. Greetings locals of the forum.

    It has been a long while since last time i was here, and I don't like to do these stuff, but progress must be made.

    As we all know, we love video games, as far as i know...

    I just make videos and put them on the internet, and i want to share them with you.

    Like I mentioned before, i don't usually like to advertise myself or all that stuff, but as I create more and more content, i want to grow as well in the progress. The only problem that comes with it, i'm a military soldier who does not have all the time in the world. I may not be the best content creator, but i do try with the time given, even if it means schedule everything in advance.

    If you like what you see, i will be thankful if you will stick around and help this channel grow.

    I guess it will be more comfortable to post just few video of each of the recent playlists (because I am not familiar with how to post playlists).

     

     

     

    P.S: The Name SerieLis stands for Gray Fox in Russian

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  2. Greetings Locals of the Forum.

    One of my favorite series that i ever played, is the Metro series, and as someone who creates content over the internet, i wanted to share this series with you.

    I play on the hardest difficulty, most of the time, depends on how hardcore i want to play this game...and of course it comes with a lot of death. I will try to share with this community as much as I can, because i haven't been here for so long, and perhaps disappearing was a mistake. But as a military soldier, it is a problem to appear when it is impossible that is why everything is scheduled in advance.

    I hope you will stick around and stay tuned, and perhaps give me the power and will to continue with this.

    Here are the shared at the moment episodes, more to come in the future.


  3. Greetings AJSA, been a long time since i was here...Had some issues, and in the end the previous project about the book series had to be stopped.

    So now resurrecting the topic into a new book, a new story line, and a fresh idea. 

    Don't worry folks who actually remembers me, which i doubt it, but oh well, i didn't forget all the help i received back in the day (last year), therefore returning the favor that i got from you guys, i'm resurrecting the characters that were given to me, and they are going to be in this story as well.

    Locations have changed, so i will not post the character description i received from you, because it includes the location, and i need to figure out where to put them now, but don't worry about this.

    So what you say folks, growing together as a family? 

    Just want to thank in advance the people who gave me the characters and just being supportive in general.

     

    BlondishMist748

    IrishRogue

    Wolfspawn

    2and900

    IcedAjack

    chocokaran67

    TonyTheGamerDad

    MaxterG

    JarlBalgruuftheGreater

    ApexSpartan 

     

    I didn't really notice, but it seems all the characters were given, were males, no females, and i'm no sexist, so i'm kinda putting female characters as well, each one of us has influence to change the world.

    In addition, the story includes youtubers, as if their shows and attitude are live in the story.

    I have their approval and their will to be in the story, so that's why they are in there, those who thought they are "more" important than me, and ignored me, might get cut off the story. 

    It's still on somewhat "pre pre alpha" version, just giving an announcement here, when i'll reach the "alpha" version, i'll post the first chapter.

    I found passion to writing not long ago once again, found my muse (i guess that's how you say it) , and a fresh idea...and i would like to share my work when it's done.

    Thank you for reading so far, you're a wonderful person for doing so, and actually caring.

    And if you have any questions, put them bellow i'll try to answer as the best as i can.


  4. The Courier? Elegant Dota 2 reference or Fallout New Vegas throwback?

    Either way I like it!

    What's the series about? I've always loved writing but I've never really done anything on a serious note. But seeing how enthusiastic you are I might try something like this myself.

    The courier is just an idea that came for the fact that one of the side character was supposed to deliver a letter, so i called him a courier because no one knew who he was.

    the series are in sort of fantasy land that i made up, on medieval times, i can't really tell of what it is about because for some reason that people would steal that idea.

    Let's say: lessons, vengeance, greed, love, hate, death, twins, brothers, prison, powers (not the usual magic stuff, something different - no fireballs coming from people hands), war, invasion, rebels, revolution, order, betrayal, choices and consequences.

     

    I guess that covers it...

     

    And if you want to write just do it, nothing should stop you, and just a suggestion, to feel more powerful during the writing, put two steps from hell.

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  5. I don't have favorites, i use them all, for me everyone has his moments.

    Dallas for the serious part, like he is the boss in there, well for me at least.

    Wolf for goofy moments, but i use him rarely, my friend always uses him.

    Chains, well to tell the truth really rarely because when we play 4 in the group someone always uses him, for me (idk if that's true at all...) he is the ruthless one.

    And Hoxton, idk for some reason all the stealth type ( I like stealth alot) i use him.

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  6. Hello there fellow members of AJSA, you probably don't know what this subject is about, basically i made a thread about it around a month ago, that let's say started it all, i was asking you fellow members and friends of AJSA for ideas because i was kinda stuck in developing characters, but now all the ideas are set and i got all the characters needed to make this series a magnificent.

    Already wrote few chapters and i'll represent their names just below, and because i finished all my exams and i have alot of free time which means i will be able to finish the first book before the end of the summer, maybe even before it even begins, all i need is few full days to to finish it, people ask me how many chapters there will be, i'm not sure yet, i can say minimum 15, even more, i'm pretty sure about that.

     

    Ok you waited long enough.

    Names of the first few chapters i made.

    Chapter 1: The courier

    Chapter 2: End of the line

    Chapter 3:  Dreams and War

    Chapter 4: Fear And Hope

    Chapter 5: Angel from the Bed

    Chapter 6: The Arena

     

    * some of the chapter names may change, if i'll think of something better.

     

    If you have any questions submit them here, i'll try my best to answer them in the best way possible, i know i didn't put the lore here, and i changed alot of details since the first thread, for example alot of more cities were added and their rulers even a whole new land that gave me an idea for later books, anyway, like i said submit your questions here, and i'll try not to spoil alot of details that shouldn't be mentioned, well basically this book supposed to be mature that includes choices and consequences and  maybe some other stuff.

     

    I guess that's it, thank you for your time.


  7. Hey everyone, sorry for not reporting for a while, and sorry for starting the same subject on the same topic i made not long ago, but this is an update because i already had enough ideas, in addition people usually don't read all the comments made (there were 49 in the previous one so you could understand that fact...) 

    Also because of all the changes that were made i want to put here to mention pretty much some facts that i added...

    Oh and thank you all for the support.

    Last but not least before i begin with the notes, 2 days ago i finished my final exam so i'm going to boost the writing which means i probably going to finish the first one before the end of the summer.

     

    Now to the notes.

     

    * Protagonist name of the first book: Cain, comes from craftsman, he is a blacksmith in case people didn't read the first topic, so it fits

    * Every book there's a new protagonist, at least for now. 

    * I got so many ideas from you guys that posted on the previous topic that i made alot more cities.

    City - Ruler

    North:

    Theobald -  Count Daron 

    Craagan - Lord Damarion 

    Krifan - Lady Erika

    Jedrek - Count Erryn 

     

    Center:

     

    Gardimon - King Malik - king of the land

    Vorin - Lord Alvin

     

    South:

     

    Bluewynn - Count Agadon

    Karistor - Lord Yan 

    Magadon - Lord Andre

    Nymphaion - Count Alexander 

     

    West & north west

     

    Aragos - High King Myara - King of the mountains (kinda cliche i know :P)

    Arlen - Jarl Alistair

    Beleral - Jarl Zaurac

    Hinnos - Jarl Nymzeit 

     

    (I took the ranks according to wikipedia so i guess i put a bit too much cliche in this...if you think i should change the ranks, let me know)

     

     

    Well i guess that's all the cities and their rulers

    * Well with many cities i could tell you one thing for sure, there will be more than 3 books that were planned in the first place...

    * I'm also changing the main title of the book. to what? well i could tell you, but i'm kinda thinking myself for the best title for the huge         series...

    Again thank you all for the support.

     

    If there's any question feel free to ask, i'll try the best to answer them. I know i didn't explain at all what the lore of them in this topic, apologies about that, but if i'll tell, there will be many spoilers...

     

    I guess that's it...


  8. You know there's the neutral option right? just in case you just don't want to side with any of them...and then greybeards, peace talks, truce to be more clear...

    Just saying...in case you didn't know.

    I just created "Letho the gullet" from witcher 2, and went on empire choice like he sided (sort of) with Nilfgaardians.

    In addition, i only choose the empire from now on, because no one takes away my favorite Jarl, Balgruuf the Greater!


  9. Dear god, 36 play throughs of Witcher 3. *collapses*

    Well to tell the truth that's probably the amount someone would play...but i guess some endings are unwanted...for example in the witcher 2, killing Loredo every time....

    I think i already played the game over 10-20 times...and every time learning something new.

     

    Other than that i'm going to feel bad for few facts...my pc is weak...like seriously, i want to play this game so hard, but can't afford to build a pc that won't melt from that huge game...I love CDPRED and their work...hell my dream job is to work there...or at least visit the HQ, hell saying each one of them "Thank you!" shaking their hands, that's another dream in the list... 

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  10. Greetings, it's pretty much a dumb question, it's just the fact that i don't really understand the whole ranking system in the community.

    I wonder what does it give?

    What kind of Ranks out there at all?

    And what does written above the Avatar mean (advance member, newbie) - because i saw people with different types of names above their Avatar (and no i don't mean the name itself)?

    What do they represent?

     

    I hope the questions were understandable, and would be glad to receive answers...


  11. To clarify your questions

     

    1. I did mean captain of the guard, I just spelt it wrong. So yeah captain not caption  

     

    2. I did mean to use caravel, not caravan. A caravel was a light weight, fast trading ship. I should have specified that it was a ship.

     

    3. And for the question about Krifan and Adeb, yes do what ever you want. I would like to point out that the Adeb I had in mind only smuggled because he needed money, so he would smuggle slaves he just would be super happy about it.

     

    Thanks for reading. 

    Well those two characters seems to fit, but they will only appear, most likely...

    The captain in the second book, and the merchant at the third, thank you for your submission anyway...


  12. Alright this might be long as since I've thought or making and RPG so I have a couple characters in mind so I hope you don't mind me putting down two characters.

    Also is this in the style of European middle ages or what ( I made my names in that style, feel free that alter-change them)

    Also I've noticed that you haven't made a trade-based city and because one of my characters is a merchant I think he should in a city like that. I made a city name but feel free to change it.

     

    Name= Cheswyck Wyanns

    Occupation= Caption of city Guard in Gardimon

    Appearance= He is a middle aged man, short brown-black hair, slightly muscular, a faint scar on left side of his neck.

     

    Short Bio = Cheswyck is the caption of the guard and he takes his job very seriously. He never married and moved from his family farm when he was young so he doesn't really have anyone to talk to. He also hates mercenaries and thieves of any kind and thinks they should hang all thieves they find. He hates mercenaries because he finds them dishonorable and greedy. He has a special blueish toned war axe that he found of a dead thief that he took for his own. Cheswyck doesn't trust travelers or adventures as well, finding them to mysterious and only in it for the money and wenches.

    Character 2

     

    Name= Adeb Cenen

    Location= Taren ( like I said change it or leave it out as you see fit) 

    Occupation= Merchant/smuggler/trader

    Appearance= Adeb has light blonde hair that goes down to his shoulders, young- in his early 20s, green eyes, fairly good looking

     

    Short Bio= Adeb was the son of a powerful merchant. His father died 4 years earlier and with him went his fortune. Adeb had to sell on his belongings and buy trade caravel to keep himself afloat. Adeb has also acted part smuggler in recent years to help, as there are more powerful trade families trying to edge him out and get pay back for the damages his father did to their businesses. He smuggles all kinds of people and items and has gotten good at hiding things in with cargo and knows secret bays and places to land far away from the eyes of the law.     

    Thank you for your post, and i'll take in mind with the city name

    Few questions though because my English isn't great, or you just misspelled which is ok, because again my English isn't that good...or i missunderstood, well if you can answer those...that would clear that up.

    What is caption of the guards? did you mean captain?

    What is caravel? did you mean caravan?

    And one question just to see if you don't mind changing some of them...

    The merchant one, Adeb, does someone like could work with Krifan, because if he smuggles goods and people (which probably means slaves) i guess Krifan is one of his best clients, wouldn't you agree?

     

    And for protocol, because again i forgot to put alot of details...Gardimon is the capital, it has the greatest treasury, which means it trades with all the cities, and because of the war, it makes even greater fortune, supporting without interfering (I mean sending troops).

    But now with that information that you gave me about the fact there's no trade-base city, you actually gave me a way to fix chapter 3, no spoilers yet, wait till i'll finish...


  13. When does it come out? Your book I mean, can't wait to read it. By the way, what's the name for the book?

    When? well it's in progress at the moment...probably during the summer, not sure about that fact, depends on how long it will take for me to finish writing it. 

    Name...well...

    I'm calling it

    "The Eye" - _____ [insert second title here XD]

    Just kidding, well the main title remains, but i'm still thinking about a second title...

    Maybe i'll figure something out when i'll finish it...

     

    There will be three books, three ideas that were developed, funny how i got a semi title for them, but i can't find for the first one...oh well we'll see.


  14. I noticed a faulty in this sir. 

    According to history Sweden had 4000 people living in that country in the middle ages and that was one of the five most powerful countries in Europe at the time, so i SUGGEST that you lower the population of every city a bit, and sorry for going off-topic. I was thinking because most people were farmers during the middle ages i'll add a farmer named Garreth or Eric, that comes along after a few chapters maybe as a side-character. He's a greedy man and wont be afraid to take a coin he finds on the ground and put it in his pouch. He's not fearless but he is not the most scared guy in the universe, he's quite strong because, you know he works at a farm and that can make a man quite strong. His family comes from the scandinavian countries (or something like it) and his mother's name is Hilda (or if you want something really medieval then maybe Tor-Hildur, yes it is a girls-name) and his father's name is Magnus or Lars. He had 7 siblings so 8 children in total and to this day only 3 remains (one of them Garreth/Eric). He can quite easily get sick, but recovers quickly. He owns the normal things that one must have at a farm, a hoe for his crops, (NOT A HOOKER) a mean old nasty knife/dagger/axe to butcher his animals, and that's quite it. That is my suggestion and have a good day. :D

    Well thank you for your character post...

    It's a fantasy book, so i'm not here to deliver a history lesson here...in addition, the first time i wrote this thread it was a general plan, i didn't think of every detail through and i made alot of changes since then.. I agree i may put too many population on each city, the population has decreased.

    Anyway thanks for the replay, every post is appreciated...

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  15. Everyone who supported me with this writing, i want to thank you all...i truly love you all, i love this community 

    To show gratitude, i'm going to put most of the characters maybe all (those who fit more to the second\third book, will be mentioned then....) as a standalone chapter, showing their origin story, and to show more impact  on the protagonist, to show that he is not the only one i care for, i care for every character suggested here, and to give more information how they actually affect the story (they most likely will have a certain role...which few know about).

    I hope i said everything above in the right way, again love you all, you were the only one supporting me in this project...

    Unfortunately i'm kinda in a block right now...which means its going to take a while to reach your origin stories, i need to finish with the protagonist origin story to make him meet the characters you suggested.


  16. Few more notes to everyone, i changed alot from what i wrote in the first time.

    Gardimon is the capital city.

    Theobald is at war against Bluewynn (Thank you chocokaran67)

    Every city has its lord, except for Gardimon where the king lives.

    Gardimon is neutral, its better for business.

    Theobald, Vortin, Krifan and Craagan are northern cities against the south, Bluewynn, and some other names, will put them later.

    Gardimon is in the center.

    I think i mentioned everything, i guess. if something else will come up, i will notify you all, who is interested.


  17. Oh well, hope my char is able to make a cameo in your fantasy series... Can't wait to read it.. If you need any help with editing/proof reading, etc. Just pm me.

    Don't worry he will, either chapter 4 or 5 he'll come out.

    I did put your city in the book, because no one else submitted names for the cities, i probably going to need some help with the grammar, because i suck XD

    Thank you anyway for considering to join this and taking part in this.